The age at which people have children has risen. Some people believe that this may cause problems for both these families and the societies they live in. What is your opinion about this?

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In today's days, men and women postpone their first childbirth compared with past days. Many

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argue that

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may cause problems for

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and individuals. I strongly agree with

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opinion.

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increased life expectations, many young

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get married late, compared with older generations. Even after marriage, they are reluctant to give birth to a child immediately.

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increased tensions and age factors, there is a high chance of getting infertility problems. One survey conducted in my homeland says that there is a 100% growth rate in establishing fertility centres over the

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year and

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visiting these centres are

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inclined.

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, giving childbirth late would

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create negative impacts on their family

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, if we have our first baby at the age of 35,we won't have the proper time and energy to spend with our loved ones. By the time a child completes education, we will cross 50. As

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parents we won't have the energy to support them when they really need it in their teenage. Not only that youngsters' availability in

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will be delayed, which affects the human life cycle balance. In conclusion, I strongly agree with the majority of

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giving childbirth late will cause problems for both individuals and

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