Nowadays, more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Although
, preparing food
at home is the usual method for having daily meals
, however
, majority of people
buying their food
instead
of that recently. It can save time
and provide an interesting experience by trying a new kind of food
but there are also
drawbacks to be taken into account.
Firstly
, one benefit of purchasing people
's ready meals
is that they are saving their time
furthermore
effort. Employed and
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for instance
, sometimes cannot make a balance between their missions and house working (which includes cooking), and for the lack of time
, they prefer to buy ready meals
instead
of preparing it
by themselves, which keeps their Correct pronoun usage
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time
and energy. Secondly
, purchasing food
is advantageous because it allows the chance to learn more about the traditional food
of diverse countries by trying different kinds of meals
and gaining a new recipe
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On the other hand
, one problem when people
bought food
is that it potentially exposes them to being sick. For example
, when the food
is bought, usually it is not known how it is prepared, is it with a cleaned
environment and healthier standards or not? Replace the word
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As a result
, this
reason is enough to increase the potential of being sick more than the others who made the meals
by themselves. Another possible issue is that it affects the budget badly. spending a lot of money without determining essential needing (taking into account that buying food
daily is not one of the basic needs), in the long run, may lead to the poor.
In conclusion, while
people
purchasing food
can be beneficial, it can also
lead to poor and bad health.Submitted by nouraa.alsweed on
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