in many countrie, a small numer of people earn extermly high salaries. some people believe that this good for the country, but other think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. discuss but these views and give your opinion.

people
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regards to fix a maximum wage barrier.few
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opine that
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that
law maker
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should fix the wages above
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level.As far as
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am concerned
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
governments
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introduce
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above
certain
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level. on the one hand ,
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extremly
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extremely
high salary is good for the country because it
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the
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quality of life
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the country and
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societies
.
furthermore
,
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salary helps
people
to increase
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of living in order to face dearness .
As a result
, these individuals can provide quality education and good health facilities to their families
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encourage
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people
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hard work
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on the other hand
, limiting the salaries will
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be beneficial because huge salary
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difference
differences
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difference
between two
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