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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts delineate the methods used to get rid of hazardous waste items in the United Kingdom,
Sweden
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 and
Korea
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. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective it is readily apparent that each country has different popular methods of dumping these substances.In the United Kingdom incineration is the most used type ,
whereas
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 it is recycling in
Korea
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 and
Sweden
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 prefers underground disposal. Recycling is mostly practised in the Republic of
Korea
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 accounting for 69%of total disposal and in ,
Sweden
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 it is 25%becoming the second most used manner.
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 recycling is a popular pattern of removing dangerous material in both
Korea
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 and
Sweden
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 , in the UK it becomes the least popular way ,comprising 2% of the total.with regard to underground disposal,
Sweden
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 gets rid of 55%of its dangerous items using
this
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 manoeuvre and it is 22%in the Republic of
Korea
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.Contrastly, British usage is 8%; leaving it as less famous. In the UK , 82% of waste disposal is done through incineration,
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 it is 20% and 9% in
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 and
Korea
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 respectively.Dumping at sea is only practised in the UK ,not in the other two countries.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sweden, korea with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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