n many countries, it is common for people to consume fast food. However, some people believe that fast food has too much influence on our lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, fast

foods

are ubiquitous,

it

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means, a massive quantity of

junk

meals have influenced multitudinous aspects

for

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modern

human

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like

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way of life and diet. I strongly agree with the earlier paradigm which will be detailed in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with, several countries face serious health problems like obesity after there are countless

junk

food stores

in

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all over the world. To exemplify, many

population

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in the United States of America suffer

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phenomenon because fast

foods

like burgers, pizzas, and fried

chickens

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contain huge fat.

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,

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number of people in that state

have

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to obtain medical

threatment

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treatment

to solve multiple effects.

Therefore

, the government should release more budget to obliterate

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problem which causes drifting

perspectiv

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perspectives

like the essence of healthy life.

Furthermore

,

foods

which are served as soon as possible may make people

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drop their preferences to purchase those than select good nutrition products. It happens

due to

the first type of meals are able to consume by some persons like workers who never have adequate time to

wait

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the food process.

Consequently

, those

foods

might change public choices about

beverages

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needs.

Additionally

, meals with detrimental sides as

output

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of

deep

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frying method can disturb our healthy diet. To illustrate, I got

sorethroat

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sore throat

in view of I consumed

junk

foods

in elephantine frequency couple

years

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ago. From that case, I avoid snacks which are provided with much oil or fat. In conclusion, I stand on the position that

junk

nutritions create hazardous impacts

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our life. Some aspects like modern

human's

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lifestyle and

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diet rule have been influenced by

foods

which

is

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made fastly.

In addition

, we got obesity population as

drawbacks

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of

junk

food.