In
this
contemporary epoch,there is
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argument over the
issuesFix the agreement mistake
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that marketing has become a best-loved
time
pass among young individuals.
This
essay will
further
reasonsChange preposition
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for the same in upcoming paragraphs.which
leadCorrect subject-verb agreement
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to a logical conclusion.
There
areChange the verb form
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adequate evidence of
this
view.
WhichCorrect pronoun usage
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are substantial the
top notchAdd a hyphen
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reason is that shopping is
way
to best
time
spend in free
time
.
However
,when individuals do not have to do anything in
freeCorrect pronoun usage
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time
then
they think too much
as well as
they mostly get confused so
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marketing is the
way
that people get refreshed their
mindFix the agreement mistake
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and relax their
bodyFix the agreement mistake
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.Adding more to it nowadays in
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most of the society there were a lot of shopping
mallFix the agreement mistake
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were opened as
everydayReplace the word
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a lot of masses were visited for shopping in the mall and
inChange preposition
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regular days all new trends
were cameChange the verb form
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as well as
very different varieties of clothes,shoes,wallets and so many think which can attract to people and compelled to buy the stuff.
Others with distinct view opine that
according to
me individual should have to do participate in some particular activities rather than do shopping like music,painting,drama etc.
Moreover
,playing
sports
is the best
way
to spend their free
time
.
While
there are significant benefits of playing
sports
such
as playing
sports
can help them to increase their working stamina
as well as
people always make themselves fit and fine and active in their daily life.
Consequently
playing
sports
or music or other activities
it Correct pronoun usage
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will help
toCorrect pronoun usage
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do Unnecessary verb
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make their career in some of that
fieldFix the agreement mistake
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.whilst doing shopping is a waste of money and
time
in
this
era.
To conclude
well in my opinion shopping is
also
a Remove the article
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some Correct quantifier usage
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way
to spend their pastime but
governmentAdd an article
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should have to hold some leisure activities
in Change preposition
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every week so individuals have to spend their best
time
in
goodChange the article
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way
.