Gender equality has not been achieved in our society. Women still do not have the same rights and opportunities as men. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is observed that the equality of
gender
is not solved yet, so many women
suffer from inequality such
as the guarantee of rights
and opportunities
. I disagree with this
opinion.
To begin
with, there are several factors why women
do not have the same rights
as men. Firstly
, many people
still have stereotypes about women
's roles in their families. A lot of families have each roles
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role
such
as doing household, earning money, educating their kids and so on. Although
stereotype
is an essential problem between Add an article
the stereotype
gender
in the past, it is not been solved yet. Therefore
, women
still suffer from stereotypes, which many older people
have. Secondly
, women
cannot be provided the
same job Add the preposition
with the
opportunities
compared to men. If women
get married, they will give up their job and career. So many employers do not prefer to employ women
. Such
a situation shows a lack of women
's job opportunities
.
On the other hand
, more and more women
have the same rights
and opportunities
as men. First,
in modern society, there are a lot of women
who work at major
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a major
company
. There are many Fix the agreement mistake
companies
women
with good abilities these days,
because they try to increase their knowledge and get high qualifications. These Remove the comma
apply
women
can work at a major company. In addition
, more and more the inequality of gender
is disappearing. In modern society, many people
try to stop the inequality of gender
. For example
, they hold a demonstration and demand the guarantee of basic rights
. It is a positive way that people
can change their stereotypes.
In conclusion, although
some women
cannot be guaranteed their rights
, it is better than before. Thus
, I disagree with this
opinion.Submitted by yoohj0802 on
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