Gender equality has not been achieved in our society. Women still do not have the same rights and opportunities as men. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is observed that the equality of
gender
is not solved yet, so many
women
suffer from inequality
such
as the guarantee of
rights
and
opportunities
. I disagree with
this
opinion.
To begin
with, there are several factors why
women
do not have the same
rights
as men.
Firstly
, many
people
still have stereotypes about
women
's roles in their families. A lot of families have each
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such
as doing household, earning money, educating their kids and so on.
Although
stereotype
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is an essential problem between
gender
in the past, it is not been solved yet.
Therefore
,
women
still suffer from stereotypes, which many older
people
have.
Secondly
,
women
cannot be provided
the
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same job
opportunities
compared to men. If
women
get married, they will give up their job and career. So many employers do not prefer to employ
women
.
Such
a situation shows a lack of
women
's job
opportunities
.
On the other hand
, more and more
women
have the same
rights
and
opportunities
as men.
First,
in modern society, there are a lot of
women
who work at
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a major
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company
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. There are many
women
with good abilities these days
,
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because they try to increase their knowledge and get high qualifications. These
women
can work at a major company.
In addition
, more and more the inequality of
gender
is disappearing. In modern society, many
people
try to stop the inequality of
gender
.
For example
, they hold a demonstration and demand the guarantee of basic
rights
. It is a positive way that
people
can change their stereotypes. In conclusion,
although
some
women
cannot be guaranteed their
rights
, it is better than before.
Thus
, I disagree with
this
opinion.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • wage gap
  • gender parity
  • glass ceiling
  • gender discrimination
  • equal opportunities
  • patriarchal society
  • empowerment
  • stereotypes
  • work-life balance
  • inclusive policies
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