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The graph illustrates the amount of energy usage by fuel in the US from 1980 to 2030. It can readily apparent that Petrol and Oil were the most consumed energy by the citizen of the US, followed by Coal and Natural Gas.

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, Nuclear, Solar/Wind and Hydropower were the least energy to use. By 1980, Petrol and Oil have combusted around 35 quadrillion units,

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it fluctuated in the next 15 years, and continued by increased exponentially until reached a peak of roughly 48 in 2030. The same pattern happened with Coal and Natural Gas,

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their value was about half that of Petrol and Oil. Natural Gas stopped the trend in 2015 and remain stable by 25 in the

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15 years of monitoring. Meanwhile, coal continue to grow until it scored 30 in 2030. Nuclear, Solar/Wind and Hydropower began with the same number which was 4 in the initial period, and fluctuated steadily in 50 years of the survey, coming

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6, 5 and 4 respectively in the final year.

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