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People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Do the benefits of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, a lot of information exists only in certain
languages
.
Due to
this
,
people
 who don`t know other
languages
use
 transitional
apps
. Some
people
 think that using transitional
apps`
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advantages
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more
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 than disadvantages. In my point of view, individuals shouldn`t
use
 transitional
apps
. Cause, there
is
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 more disadvantages than benefits. One reason is that when
people
use
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translator
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, their
brain
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 did not work. If
person
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a person
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 uses
apps
 like that, he or she starts becoming fooler. It can
leads
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 to big problems.
People
 must always
use
 their
brain
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brains
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 to solve any
of
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problems
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their problems
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. But when
computer
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the computer
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 does it for you, you do not think with your
brain
. A second reason is that
people
 should know global
languages
.
In these
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 days, approximately all
of
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information
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the information
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 is translated or
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 in global
languages
 like English. If you want to communicate with
people
 from another country, you should
to
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know one of
universal
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the universal
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languages
. Thanks to
this
, you can study anything you want from everywhere you want. As
i
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 have already mentioned, roughly all of
data
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the data
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 is translated or
wrote
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written
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 in
universal
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a universal
the universal
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 language. One final reason is that there are a lot of mistakes in the translation
apps
. Sometimes,
translator
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the translator
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 may understand you incorrectly.
Due to
this
,
people
 who don`t know
this
 language
,
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 may have
an
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another concept. It
also
 might
leads
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 to
the
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apply
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conflict or misunderstanding. If you do not want to have problems like that, you should learn
language
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the language
a language
show examples
. In conclusion, you can
use
 translation
apps
 and don`t worry about it. But would be better, if you
use
 your
brain
instead
 of
this
.
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