Nowadays, distance-learning programs have gained in popularity, but some people argue that online courses can never be taken as good as those taken at a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, especially after the pandemic Covid-19, online classes become the most wanted classes to attend, obviously they offer flexible places to
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and various topics.
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, there are several limitations if the classes are only held online,
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as minimum social learning and
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. I personally believe that distance learning is complementary to education
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since its advantages outweigh any drawbacks.
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with, learning with
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to
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, which we feel comfortable
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or even
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. The more
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we
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the easier we learn, so
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we conduct the learning is the important part.
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, by using online learning people can
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material that
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to find in their territory,
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access
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or human resources.
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from
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in Indonesia can learn to code some
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learning through
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.
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,
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the habit from offline to online
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also
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emerge numerous drawbacks.
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there are physical or social activities in online meeting platforms,
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student or teenager will
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opportunity to get to know
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others. Since social skill has the main role
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our future career,
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process of growth cannot be neglected.
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, large online
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make
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cannot
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on every single
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the probability
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students to
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is higher. They can turn off their camera and play games or eat a lot, despite still
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can make a bad output of education,
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leaders will be born. All in all, I believe that
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learning will become the solution
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education, with
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and
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to accommodate,
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, not all
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can be converted to online since the student still
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to learn social skills and
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