Nowadays, distance-learning programs have gained in popularity, but some people argue that online courses can never be taken as good as those taken at a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, especially after the pandemic Covid-19, online classes become the most wanted classes to attend, obviously they offer flexible places to
study
and various topics. However
, there are several limitations if the classes are only held online, such
as minimum social learning and focus
. I personally believe that distance learning is complementary to education,
since its advantages outweigh any drawbacks.
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