The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

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The chart presents the average

time

spent doing three free

time

activities on a

day

by the Chinese, American,

Turkish

and

Brazilian

visitors

on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

Overall

, American

tourists

spent the least

time

doing leisure activities

whereas

the

Turkish

and

Brazilian

travellers spent much more.

Brazilian

visitors

spend most of their free

time

sitting at the beach, 6

hours

each

day

. Chinese

tourists

spent half of that, only 3

hours

each

day

However

, in terms of reading books,

visitors

from China spent double the

hours

reading each

day

than Brazilians did, 8 and 6

hours

respectively. American and

Turkish

tourists

were quite similar, 5 and 4

hours

were spent reading books respectively.

However

, The

Turkish

spent more

time

sitting at the beach that the Americans, an hour difference. In terms of visiting places,

Brazilian

tourists

spent the longest, 2

hours

each

day

. Chinese

visitors

spent the least amount of

hours

sightseeing, only an hour a

day

Turkish

and

Brazilian

visitors

both spent 3

hours

visiting places.

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The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

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