There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

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Dear manager, I am sowjanya writing

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letter to inform you about your bus services which I was facing daily

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going to my office and coming back to home. Let me explain to you in detail, I am currently working as a software employee

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nova tech IT company. Every day I should catch the number 2233 bus which will arrive at 7.00am daily and I can reach my working place by 8.00am. Nowadays,

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transport is arriving late and there is a situation of booking a cab and reaching my office.

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, I have wasted a lot of money in registering a pass to the route. As a

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result I have to face more problems by going late. I suggest you if there is a lack in

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number of transportations to the route can you please add another bus in the same route. I hope you will consider

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suggestion and solve

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problem soon. Thanking you, Yours faithfully, sowjanya

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

adhering to schedules
inconvenience
daily routine
punctuality
frequency during peak hours
overcrowding
commuters
update system
reliable
maintenance
breakdowns
irregular bus timings
passengers
delays
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