There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear manager, I am sowjanya writing
this
letter to inform you about your bus services which I was facing daily
while
going to my office and coming back to home. Let me explain to you in detail, I am currently working as a software employee
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nova tech IT company. Every day I should catch the number 2233 bus which will arrive at 7.00am daily and I can reach my working place by 8.00am. Nowadays,
this
transport is arriving late and there is a situation of booking a cab and reaching my office.
Moreover
, I have wasted a lot of money in registering a pass to the route. As a
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result I have to face more problems by going late. I suggest you if there is a lack in
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number of transportations to the route can you please add another bus in the same route. I hope you will consider
this
suggestion and solve
this
problem soon. Thanking you, Yours faithfully, sowjanya
koyi
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koji
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adhering to schedules
  • inconvenience
  • daily routine
  • punctuality
  • frequency during peak hours
  • overcrowding
  • commuters
  • update system
  • reliable
  • maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • irregular bus timings
  • passengers
  • delays
  • unreliable
  • appointments
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