Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there are many people

think

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who think

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students

don’t need to go

school

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, they can just stay at

home

to

study

well. There are

also

some parents thinking their

childs

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child

should go to

school

,

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because in some parent’s

mind

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minds

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,

school

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the school

a school

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can provide better education

resource

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resources

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. In my opinion, I generally agree to go to

school

study

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. The reason why I think it’s possible to

study

in

school

is that

students

can’t control themselves

wll

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well

will

. Some

students

will play

game

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games

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on the

internet

,

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when they

study

on

internet

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the internet

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. When parents come to check what their

child

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children

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do, the child will change

website

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the website

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to make a feel

is

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like they

study

hard. So you may never know the

students

’

study

situation and their grades if

study

through the

internet

.

For example

, my sister

study

at

home

recently.

However

, I found that she just sometimes made notes and

then

she could play

game

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games

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with her friends. Not only that

,

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but

also

I think

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studying

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at

home

will influence some poor

students

. Because the poor don’t have enough money to support their

children

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children's

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study

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studies

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on

internet

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the internet

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. Give an example, it’s hard to

life

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live

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for someone. But now, their

childs

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children

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need a phone or pad to

study

. They can’t stand

this

fee so

the

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poor

students

may lose

the

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their

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education.

However

, there are many people

say

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who say

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that

students

study

at

home

better than

study

at

school

. Because they think if

students

study

at

school

they need to make sure there will be safe when

students

go to

school

. And some parents worry about their

childs

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children

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will be hungry or

feel

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feeling

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cold in

school

. So they prefer to

study

at

home

than

studying

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study

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at

school

. From what

have

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has

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been discussed, we can learn that there are many

advantage

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advantages

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to

study

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studying

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at

school

than

study

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studying

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at

home

. So I generally

agree

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onagree

toagree

withagree

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study

at

home

.