The advent of the internet has made it possible for people to work from home. Do you feel this working arrangement has more advantages or disadvantages? Share personal examples in your essay.

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The development of the internet has made working from

home

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become practicable.

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, I do not believe the advantages of

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trend could outweigh the drawbacks it brought to everyone.

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essay will discuss my perspective with detailed analyses. On the one hand, the most significant benefit of finishing tasks from your own hideout is that

people

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can save energy for other activities. Travelling now and

then

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is an activity that cost a lot of effort

everyday

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. Without the need of participating in traffic,

people

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can have more leisure time and vitality for other things

such

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as sports or

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out with family and friends. Taking myself as an illustration, hardly can

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have time to entertain myself when

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have to go to the office

everyday

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, but since my company release a term allowing employees to

work

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from their accommodation, my life just suddenly

become

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becomes

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more enjoyable when I

capable

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of doing my hobbies.

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, working from

home

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can

also

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benefit

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the environement

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environement

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environment

due to

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the

cut off

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vehicles

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of vehicles

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from the streets. Fewer vehicles

means

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less carbon dioxide will be released

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from

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the

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nature.

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, working from

home

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can make

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a worker's

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worker's

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productivity decrease.

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, when doing things at

home

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, many

people

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including myself let their hair down too frequently

that

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will indirectly

affect

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affects

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the jobs they are working on. Lack of concentration and

competitive

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a competitive

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atmosphere make employees can not realise their own

responsibilites

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responsibilities

responsibility

works

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work

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, staying at

home

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too often can let to a sedentary lifestyle which will result in many diseases. In more detail, Sitting in one place to

work

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for a long time

with

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apply

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regularity

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can make

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people

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people's

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weight rise

uncontrollable

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uncontrollably

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and lead to obesity. Let's take

myself

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as an example, when

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had to go to

work

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frequently, I just weight

for

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apply

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about 70kg, but right after having the access to

work

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from

home

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, I became heavier with added 11kg. So, finishing tasks from

home

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somehow can damage

people

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's daily life

as well as

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create issues for companies.

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, the dark side of

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trend is heavier than the sunny side. All of the

fact

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I mentioned above is what I already experienced.

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, I believe that if we can balance

between

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apply

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these pros and cons, working from

home

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will be a

bless

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

383 words

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The advent of the internet has made it possible for people to work from home. Do you feel this working arrangement has more advantages or disadvantages? Share personal examples in your essay.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some cities of the world, cars are replacing bicycles. However, in some other cities, bicycles are replacing cars. What are the reasons for these two developments? In your opinion, which one better?

In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why is this happened? How this can be solved?

International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?