The advent of the internet has made it possible for people to work from home. Do you feel this working arrangement has more advantages or disadvantages? Share personal examples in your essay.

The development of the internet has made working from

home

become practicable.

However

, I do not believe the advantages of

this

trend could outweigh the drawbacks it brought to everyone.

This

essay will discuss my perspective with detailed analyses. On the one hand, the most significant benefit of finishing tasks from your own hideout is that

people

can save energy for other activities. Travelling now and

then

is an activity that cost a lot of effort

everyday

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. Without the need of participating in traffic,

people

can have more leisure time and vitality for other things

such

as sports or

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out with family and friends. Taking myself as an illustration, hardly can

i

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I

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have time to entertain myself when

i

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I

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have to go to the office

everyday

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, but since my company release a term allowing employees to

work

from their accommodation, my life just suddenly

become

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more enjoyable when I

capable

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of doing my hobbies.

Moreover

, working from

home

can

also

benefit

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environement

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environment

due to

the

cut off

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vehicles

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from the streets. Fewer vehicles

means

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less carbon dioxide will be released

to

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from

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the

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nature.

On the other hand

, working from

home

can make

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a worker's

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worker's

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productivity decrease.

For instance

, when doing things at

home

, many

people

including myself let their hair down too frequently

that

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will indirectly

affect

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the jobs they are working on. Lack of concentration and

competitive

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atmosphere make employees can not realise their own

responsibilites

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responsibilities

responsibility

to

works

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.

Moreover

, staying at

home

too often can let to a sedentary lifestyle which will result in many diseases. In more detail, Sitting in one place to

work

for a long time

with

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regularity

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regularly

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can make

people

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people's

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weight rise

uncontrollable

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uncontrollably

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and lead to obesity. Let's take

myself

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me

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as an example, when

i

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I

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had to go to

work

frequently, I just weight

for

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about 70kg, but right after having the access to

work

from

home

, I became heavier with added 11kg. So, finishing tasks from

home

somehow can damage

people

's daily life

as well as

create issues for companies.

To sum up

, the dark side of

this

trend is heavier than the sunny side. All of the

fact

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I mentioned above is what I already experienced.

However

, I believe that if we can balance

between

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these pros and cons, working from

home

will be a

bless

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.