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Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

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Nowadays, many parents are concerned about their
children
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's scores in educational institutions. Some people think that it is waste of
time
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 to let
children
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 do another exercise in their free
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 except for educational
activities
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.From my perspective, I do disagree with
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 statement for many reasons, outlined in detail in the following paragraph before the conclusion is reached.
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,
leisure
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time
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 should be used for relaxing because they spend a lot of daytime on education. Stressful studying is able to reduce their efficiency to learn in classrooms.
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, in Europe high-school learn educational subjects for about 7 hr./day and set interesting
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 for their
children
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 in school which heir interested in after curriculum lessons, able to increase their scores more than learning only compulsory subjects.
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, relaxing
time
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 plays an important role to reduce
children
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's depression which affects their performance in the classroom.
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, overloading studying is disadvantageous for pupils. Playing sports or doing physical movement not only encouraging their physical health but
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 their mind.
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, if the offspring's
leisure
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time
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 is paid on knowledge
activities
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 which rarely move their body, it will make them weak and easy to get infected, and after
that
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 they have to stop going to school.
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, parents should balance
time
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 between studying
time
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 and using
leisure
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time
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 for physical
activities
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 for
children
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's health. In conclusion, the
leisure
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time
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 of
children
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 should pay for make them relax by leading them to do other
activities
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 in which they are interested in less stress and work out for health.
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, pupils' relaxation
time
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 should be managed by balancing.
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