Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
Nowadays, many parents are concerned about their
children
's scores in educational institutions. Some people think that it is waste of time
to let children
do another exercise in their free time
except for educational activities
.From my perspective, I do disagree with this
statement for many reasons, outlined in detail in the following paragraph before the conclusion is reached.
Firstly
, leisure
time
should be used for relaxing because they spend a lot of daytime on education. Stressful studying is able to reduce their efficiency to learn in classrooms. For example
, in Europe high-school learn educational subjects for about 7 hr./day and set interesting activities
for their children
in school which heir interested in after curriculum lessons, able to increase their scores more than learning only compulsory subjects. Therefore
, relaxing time
plays an important role to reduce children
's depression which affects their performance in the classroom.
Additionally
, overloading studying is disadvantageous for pupils. Playing sports or doing physical movement not only encouraging their physical health but also
their mind. For example
, if the offspring's leisure
time
is paid on knowledge activities
which rarely move their body, it will make them weak and easy to get infected, and after that
they have to stop going to school. Add a comma
,that
Then
, parents should balance time
between studying time
and using leisure
time
for physical activities
for children
's health.
In conclusion, the leisure
time
of children
should pay for make them relax by leading them to do other activities
in which they are interested in less stress and work out for health. Therefore
, pupils' relaxation time
should be managed by balancing.Submitted by k.kamonkan on
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