A neighbor has damaged your car while parking his/her vehicle in the lane in front of your house. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter: * explain why you are writing * describe the damage to your car and express your feelings about it * recommend what steps he/she should take to resolve the situation.

#neighbor #car #vehicle #lane #front #house #damage #feelings #steps #situation

Dear Javid, I am writing to let you know that I feel sorry about the accident you caused yesterday. The reason behind my message is that I observed

this

accident by means of a surveillance camera being installed in front of my house

while

you were parking your car, and unintentionally you bit my vehicle. Today,I have taken it to the auto service in order to determine the cost of repair.

According to

the expert ,assessment the price will be 300 dollars.It really made me a little depressed because I will be unable to use a car for one month

as well as

the expenditure shocked me. I would be extremely grateful if you compensate the expenses being assessed.Another suggestion would be to take my vehicle to the service that you are relying on and familiar with.As

this

error was caused because of your indifference,you are responsible for solving

this

concern. I hope you will address

this

issue as soon as possible. Sincerely Malik Maliki.

Submitted by malikli.malik1995 on Mon Feb 06 2023

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