Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is undeniable that
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modern-day technologies and globalization have profoundly affected the way we make choices, both small and life-long.
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of
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state that today we have
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variety of options, whether it is food, accommodation, clothing or
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a job
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.
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, in my opinion,
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range of options cannot guarantee the same amount of choices. In the next
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I shall elaborate
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viewpoint.
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technological advancement brought numerous amounts of vocations
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job
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market.
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internet access to various sources and data about any type of occupation in any part of the world, young
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can consider all options before making one of the most important decisions in their life.
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, the rise of inflation and migration crisis force
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to pursue not the dream profession, but
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one that can provide food, shelter and some status in society for them and their families.
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,
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generation has to dwell in a big city in order to start and build a career.
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a big demand
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accommodation makes
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rent
price
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prices
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go higher,
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the quality of life is still low. To illustrate, in cities like New York tenants live in small apartments with shared bathrooms and
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kitchens
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while
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paying spending half of their income. Another point, the illusion of choice is often created as
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way to make
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waste money and increase
income
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the income
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of big corporations.
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it is clear that
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fashion
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trends change every season. What is
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well-known, is that every trend is dictated by
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fashion
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business. After each
fashion
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week, the
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with a new dress
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out in our
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feed becoming
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in
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. Buying new clothing
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believe that they are fashionable,
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in reality is just money down the drain. In conclusion, I agree that nowadays
people
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can afford much more than
people
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of the past. At the same time, the modern style of life diminishes any choice and dictates a person how
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into society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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