The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The provided diagrams compare a small town named Islip as it is now with a proposed design for the future.
Overall
, it is clear that
the main changes involve the addition of a bus station, a shopping mall and a car park in the countryside. In addition
to that, a new dual carriageway will be constructed according to
the future plan.
In the planned development, two new housing schemes will be erected, then
it will be able to accommodate more residents. Another significant transformation would be that the shops which are on the north side
of the main road
, will be removed in order to introduce the bus station, shopping centre and the car park.
Furthermore
, the current main road
will be transformed into a dual carriageway which will spread around the town centre. As a new housing area will be introduced on the northeastern side
, a new road
is also
be built, connecting the housing scheme and the carriageway. Besides
, the existing main road
will be a pedestrian road
in the future. The proposed park in the southeast corner will be smaller in size compared to the one it has now. Finally
, no changes will be made to the shops on the southern side
of the main road
, the school and the residential areas on the southern side
of the town.Submitted by dmdeemanthakasun on
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