The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The provided diagrams compare a small town named Islip as it is now with a proposed design for the future.
Overall
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it is clear that
the main changes involve the addition of a bus station, a shopping mall and a car park in the countryside. Linking Words
In addition
to that, a new dual carriageway will be constructed Linking Words
according to
the future plan.
In the planned development, two new housing schemes will be erected, Linking Words
then
it will be able to accommodate more residents. Another significant transformation would be that the shops which are on the north Linking Words
side
of the main Use synonyms
road
, will be removed in order to introduce the bus station, shopping centre and the car park.
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Furthermore
, the current main Linking Words
road
will be transformed into a dual carriageway which will spread around the town centre. As a new housing area will be introduced on the northeastern Use synonyms
side
, a new Use synonyms
road
is Use synonyms
also
be built, connecting the housing scheme and the carriageway. Linking Words
Besides
, the existing main Linking Words
road
will be a pedestrian Use synonyms
road
in the future. The proposed park in the southeast corner will be smaller in size compared to the one it has now. Use synonyms
Finally
, no changes will be made to the shops on the southern Linking Words
side
of the main Use synonyms
road
, the school and the residential areas on the southern Use synonyms
side
of the town.Use synonyms
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