Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Sharing

information

transparently important rather than keep the essential

information

. I feel that

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to be applied

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been concealed

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the fact. A commonly held belief is that it is proper to share as much

information

as possible, especially in

scientific

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research business and the academic world. they maintain that

information

will solve some problems and bring

into

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a better condition. A very good example here is when we talk about

data

, they need to be clear because

data

will be used for another function : analysis

further

research and long-term education.

furthermore

, the

information

that

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shared

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will build

a

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public trust and

also

boost them to think critically.

As a result

, not only

researcher

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researchers

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,

businessman

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businessmen

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and academics

who

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take a big role but

also

public society to develop a better world. It is argued

by

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some people that some

information

is too valuable to be shared openly. They argue that if

information

are

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accessible by

diverse

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group,

data

leak estimated will

be happen

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.

For example

citizen identity

that

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shared freely by

government

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the government

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, will be used by some illegal

immigrant

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immigrants

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. if

this

case

happen

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again, local people will get difficulty in administration

it

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related to

government

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the government

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.

Therefore

,

at

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the end,

keep

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the

data

on

private

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need

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to be taken as part of an action.

To sum up

, I feel that whoever

want

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to share

an important

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important information

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information

,

they

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apply

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need to

looked

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up

about

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the value of the

information

and

also

take into consideration

about

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apply

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the outcome or impact

if

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of

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shared

information

are

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happening.