Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Sharing
information
transparently important rather than keep the essential information
. I feel that need
to be applied Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
been conceal
the fact.
A commonly held belief is that it is proper to share as much Change the verb form
been concealed
been concealing
information
as possible, especially in scientific
research business and the academic world. they maintain that Correct article usage
the scientific
information
will solve some problems and bring into
a better condition. A very good example here is when we talk about Correct pronoun usage
them into
data
, they need to be clear because data
will be used for another function : analysis further
research and long-term education. furthermore
, the information
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
shared
will build Add a missing verb
is shared
a
public trust and Remove the article
apply
also
boost them to think critically. As a result
, not only researcher
, Fix the agreement mistake
researchers
businessman
and academics Fix the agreement mistake
businessmen
who
take a big role but Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
public society to develop a better world.
It is argued by
some people that some Change preposition
apply
information
is too valuable to be shared openly. They argue that if information
are
accessible by Change the verb form
is
diverse
group, Add an article
a diverse
data
leak estimated will be happen
. Change the verb form
happen
For example
citizen identity that
shared freely by Correct pronoun usage
apply
government
, will be used by some illegal Correct article usage
the government
immigrant
. if Fix the agreement mistake
immigrants
this
case happen
again, local people will get difficulty in administration Change the verb form
happens
it
related to Correct pronoun usage
apply
government
. Correct article usage
the government
Therefore
, at
the end, Change the preposition
in
keep
the Wrong verb form
keeping
data
on private
Add an article
a private
need
to be taken as part of an action.
Fix the agreement mistake
needs
To sum up
, I feel that whoever want
to share Change the verb form
wants
an important
Remove the article
important information
a piece of important information
information
, they
need to Correct pronoun usage
apply
looked
up Change the verb
look
about
the value of the Change preposition
apply
information
and also
take into consideration about
the outcome or impact Change preposition
apply
if
shared Correct your spelling
of
information
are
happening.Change the verb form
is
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