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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visits such places?

#tourists #places #conditions #sahara #desert #antarctic #visits
In
this
 contemporary era,the topic of tourism is always debatable
that
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in
present
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 epoch there are a lot of visitors are
visited
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 areas where conditions are very difficult
such
 as
Sahara
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the Sahara
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 desert or the Antarctic.
This
 essay will be discussed both the merit and demerit in the upcoming paragraphs. Moving towards the merits first and foremost one is individual got experience from tourism of
such
 kind of
places
 like Sahara desert and Antarctic.
Additionally
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 it has
also
 got exploration of that areas
weather
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 good or bad.Adding more to it
visiting
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of
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insane
places
tourist
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tourists
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 get more attracted
of
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view
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 and beauty of nature.
However
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 some
travelers
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travellers
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are assume
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 to travel
dangerous
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 locations and challenging
places
.
For
example
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 Mount Everest is the highest destination in all over the world but each year many
travelers
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travellers
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are visit
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are visiting
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 for tracking and travelling for the pride of their nation as long as only fewer can reach the peak of the mountain and some
are die
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 there. Probing ahead,towards the demerits that these advantages are not safe for tourists
as well as
 these locations are more expensive.
Initially
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 mountains and desert
places
 are
more risky
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 for individual
such
as
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in the
last
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were
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travelled to Mount Everest for tracking they can reach
on
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the peak of
mountain
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 but after came back from that place everyone
die
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.
To conclude
 adventure is
a
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fun or thrilling for some
individual
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individuals
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.
Nevertheless
,
tourist
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tourists
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 remain at risk of death at risky locations.
Therefore
, every visitor must use caution.
Submitted by sharma1997.rahulthakur on

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