Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visits such places?

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contemporary era,the topic of tourism is always debatable

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epoch there are a lot of visitors are

visited

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areas where conditions are very difficult

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as

Sahara

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desert or the Antarctic.

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essay will be discussed both the merit and demerit in the upcoming paragraphs. Moving towards the merits first and foremost one is individual got experience from tourism of

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places

like Sahara desert and Antarctic.

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visiting

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insane

places

tourist

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get more attracted

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and beauty of nature.

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some

travelers

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are assume

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to travel

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locations and challenging

places

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Mount Everest is the highest destination in all over the world but each year many

travelers

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are visit

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for tracking and travelling for the pride of their nation as long as only fewer can reach the peak of the mountain and some

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there. Probing ahead,towards the demerits that these advantages are not safe for tourists

as well as

these locations are more expensive.

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mountains and desert

places

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more risky

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for individual

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travelled to Mount Everest for tracking they can reach

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the peak of

mountain

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but after came back from that place everyone

die

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.

To conclude

adventure is

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fun or thrilling for some

individual

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individuals

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.

Nevertheless

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tourist

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remain at risk of death at risky locations.

Therefore

, every visitor must use caution.