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Pollution of air, water and soil has become critical in last years and it takes millions of years to recoup. What are the main causes of pollution? How can we tackle this problem individually and globally?

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Air
pollution
, water and soil
has
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bacome
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become
 significant in previous years and it needs millions of years to remake. What are the major reasons
of
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for
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pollution
? How can we deal with
this
 issue
indibidually
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individually
 and
internationonally
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internationally
? In the
beggining
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beginning
, There are multiple causes of
pollution
,
also
 they are not
similer
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similar
 in the effect.
This
 essay will explain and tell the most common
pollution
 producers.
On the other hand
, the
esaay
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essay
 will mention how to solve
this
 tough
conflect
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conflict
. One of the most common causes of
pollution
 is warm gases. Unfurtenitally, These gasses are
residue
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the residue
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 of many machines that we use daily,
such
 as cars,
plans
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planes
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,
busses
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buses
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, and trains. Unluckily, That gases are harmful to
the
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apply
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pollution
, because
it
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they
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increase
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increases
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 the chance of global warming
wich
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which
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 can lead to
pollution
. On the other side, we have to handle
this
 problem by limiting the amount of gases ambitions, and the number of machines that depend on fossil
fuel
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fuels
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, like vehicles, helicopters, etc. In the end, the essay wrote
the
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about the
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 main
pollution
 causes, shared the
awarnes
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awareness
 about
this
 problem, and how to decrease the speed of its symptoms on earth.
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