With the rise of ebooks comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good forward step while others do not. What are advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Some folks argue about
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electronic
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and
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paper
books
. The
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people
claim that a good way. An alternative belief regards
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books
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both points of view are going to be examined and a particular opinion will be provided. On the one hand, we are living in
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technological era and technology is coming. Ebooks might save a lot of trees on our globe.
Moreover
, Ebooks have internet access and we easily could download a lot of
books
on our devices.
In addition
, readers who use Ebook have a tremendous quantity of language, they do not need to wait a long term to download new languages
due to
contemporary technology.
Nonetheless
, Electronic
books
have a bunch of
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and it can annoy.
On the other hand
,
people
who read the
paper
book might have a problem with their health
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. Because
people
usually read
books
at night time with low light. Low light has a harmful impact on our vision.
Additionally
,
paper
books
are produced
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trees and deforestation has a harmful influence on our environment.
Nonetheless
, my dad used to read
paper
books
he has a tremendous collection of old
books
and he told me that
paper
book does not need to charge and we always can read
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independently where we are.
To sum up
, I reckon
this
was have more advantages than disadvantages. If
people
use more Ebooks, we will save more trees.
Otherwise
, it could wipe out our green environment.
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