Most modern families have both parents working as a result children spend less and less time with their parents. What is the reason for this? What problems can this cause?
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competitive
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breaks
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For instance
, these business policies clearly change the principles of parenthood.
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a parting
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children
brings various mental and developmental changes among minors.Use synonyms
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likes
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children
.
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To conclude
, having a healthy family relationship is a blessing Linking Words
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