Most modern families have both parents working as a result children spend less and less time with their parents. What is the reason for this? What problems can this cause?

In the 21st century, human life became more complex and
compitative
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competitive
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parents
spend less amount of
time
with their
children
. In
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analysis of the reasons and the problems generating
this
issue. To start with, there are various reasons behind the busy
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of
parents
.
Firstly
, the growing number of industries
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enormous battle for profit making.
Therefore
,now employees
facing
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excessive workload that reduces their leisure
time
with the family.
According to
the American psychological association research study on mental health problems among IT professionals (2021) results that 82% of US technical professionals are spending weekly less than 10 hours with their
children
.
Additionally
, it makes their family disorganized and higher
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of anonymity among members.
Secondly
, multimillion companies and their employers now
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a hidden agenda
such
as long working hours with less
time
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break
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and the maximum utilization of their day-
time
for money making.
For instance
, these business policies clearly change the principles of parenthood.
Although
,
aparting
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a parting
parents
from their
children
brings various mental and developmental changes among minors.
For example
, it can
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to depression and anxiety among
children
especially those who have kids below 7 years of age .
For instance
, mental stress
regenerate
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developmental and health issues
whereas
adults don't get more
time
to
reconciliate
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reconcile
. Nowadays,
children
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to eat food from outside
especially
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from fast food restaurant that
supported
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by elders because they don't have any
time
to cook for their family.
This
may cause obesity and many health-related
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among
children
.
To conclude
, having a healthy family relationship is a blessing
especially
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in
modern
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a modern
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nuclear family.
Therefore
,
parents
should keep a balanced life between personal and professional goals for making their future generation
to
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attain a successful life.
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