News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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Today, society tends to watch cinematic

pictures

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without friends. On the one hand, there are a number of benefits of

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process, but

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, there are some drawbacks and issues which must be discussed and solved. In

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essay, both sides will be explained and supported with examples. First of all, there are some pluses of watching TV alone.

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people

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can watch what they really want because they do not need to respect someone’s wishes.

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people

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can watch films when it is convenient for them.

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, a person, who

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foreign

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a foreign

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language, can watch motion

pictures

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in the original.

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, numerous cons should be mentioned. If a person watches TV alone, he can feel bored. It happens because of a lack of opportunity to skip tedious

film’s

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part

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, which can be skipped thanks to talking to his friend.

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, it’s a

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fact that

people

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like to discuss a plot after watching cinematic

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. In

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the case

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of watching films and series without friends,

people

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cannot do it.

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, going to the cinema is a way to have a good time with someone’s intimates. In conclusion, watching motion

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alone can be both rewarding and problematic. Obviously,

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the disadvantages

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way to spend free time overweight

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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213 words

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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

Your opinion

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoid any change. others, however, think that change is always a good thing. discuss both views and give your opinion.

: It is important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?