Some people believe that bicycles are the best mode of transport in the cities, while others disagree. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both views and give your opinion.

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whether bikes are the best means of

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in

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urban areas. In my opinion, its drawbacks are more remarkable than the positive

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and reasons

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essay. On the one hand, riding a bike in the cities has different demerits.

Firstly

, travelling in a metropolis between places, which requires

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for a great

distance

, will take more time and effort than any other

types

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of

transport

.

For example

, Ho Chi Minh City, which is the largest metropolis

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Vietnam, is so large

in addition

to traffic congestion and lack of safe parking plots.

As a consequence

,

bicycles

are not the best

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of

transport

there. Another reason, which is addressed from the aforementioned disadvantage, is the lack of safety in the city. In fact, after cycling for a long

distance

and after that if the biker wants to take a short break, they will

also

have to keep their bike safe. In comparison to motorcycles, which are the most popular means of

transport

in Vietnam, they are less safe because it is not provided with a lock.

On the other hand

, despite being disadvantageous, I believe that its merits are more remarkably considerable.

Firstly

, riding

bicycles

, when

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to other means of

transport

such

as cars or motorbikes,

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in a more eco-friendly

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atmosphere

in

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metropolitan areas.

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European cities are typical instances of

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the contribution

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of

bicycles

engages

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to the reduction of greenhouse

emission

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emissions

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, which increases the cleanliness of the air, improving the denizens' condition.

Secondly

, not only is cycling helping the ecosystem, but

also

improving the residents' physical health. In fact, riding a bike is a vigorous activity

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to jogging, swimming or hiking because the bikers can ride for a longer

distance

than jogging and hiking and

less

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boring than swimming when it is

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of scenery.

Moreover

, as aforementioned, it does improve the bikers’ fitness, especially cardiovascular and

skeletonal

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skeletal

health. In conclusion, it is apparent that

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bicycles

are the greatest

transport

in the cities for these major reasons:

environmental

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friendly and increase fitness whilst having inconsiderable

downside

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,

such

as

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for

long

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long-distance

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distance

travel and

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higher protection from

criminal

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than other vehicles.