You have recently started a job in a new company.Write a letter to an English speaking friend.In your letter, Explain why you changed the job Describe your new job Tell him/her your other news

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Dear Mike, Good day. It's been a long since we met after graduation. Hope you are doing well. I am writing to inform you that I have started a job in a new company. As I said, I have changed my previous job because I believe that it is a time to learn not only new skills but

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enhance my technical knowledge and it is possible only to search for a job in a new platform Indeed.

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, my house is located very near to my new office premise as well. So, it is just a walkable distance from home to the office.

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, my new office resides next to supermarkets and is surrounded by a lot of vegetation in fact, and my role is perfectly matched for past experience, which I have served before. I know you will cherish it after hearing

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news. Soon we are going to meet at home for lunch. Hope you will consider my proposal, I would like to hear from you. Yours sincerely, Ravi

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

173 words

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