Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian in your letter -describe what you like about the library -say what you don’t like -make suggestions for improvements
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Dear Sir or Madam, Hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. By the way, my name is Joziba Maxmasoliyeva. I am writing this
letter after seeing a notice which was posted outside your library , in which you have asked for some opinions about improving services and facilities. I would like to give some honest feedback and some recommendations to improve . I love that there are famous works of different nationalities here . In addition
, l
always remember the sky and the stars when l
look at its blue ceiling. It also
helps me in any stressful situation. That is
to say, it calms me down .Yet, l
do not like the old desks in the library. They cause me discomfort. Because their legs are not stable . Moreover
, several lamps on the ceiling were burnt out. This
results in insufficient light for reading in the evening. For
this
reason, l
would request that you replace the lamps with other bright and usable ones . I believe that the chairs should be made comfortable to sit on by adjusting the legs . I hope you will consider my views and do the necessary action. Thank you for your attention.
Yours faithfully,
Maxmasoliyeva Joziba.Submitted by asqar4997 on
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.