Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones.

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argue that

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should prevent

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from using their

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others think that

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believe that

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shouldn't

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the fact that it causes them distraction

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they wouldn't be able to stay focused in

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, on the other ,hand some

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think that it's an effective way of learning. I believe that allowing the

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has a positive impact on

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grades because

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would be able to learn more by learning from games

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the

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could do competitions and give some presents to the winners by doing that all of the

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would be focused in

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. Some

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has a negative impact on the

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the fact that it causes them a distraction and that would

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to them failing classes.

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they banned the

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of

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in

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because they have noticed an increased number of

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failing in classes

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them using their

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the whole

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during classes.

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, some

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think that

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should be allowed to

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their

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in

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could be an effective way of learning, the

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can grip the

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's attention by conveying the information through a game on their

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a friend of mine is a

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who had a hard time teaching

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until another

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introduced her to a new teaching technique which is teaching them through a game, after that she applied it in her

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and the

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loved it very much and

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that all of them passed the

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with high scores.

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think that

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should bad

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from using

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others believe that

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should allow

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to bring their

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. I believe that

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should

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their

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during

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because it has a positive effect on their grades. One great suggestion would be that

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could allow using

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only when the

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asks them to do it in order to learn more effectively after that the

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could collect their

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and give

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to them after the

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ends.