Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones.

Some

people

argue that

schools

should prevent

children

from using their

smartphones

during

school

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day

while

others think that

children

should be allowed to

use

their

smartphones

.

People

believe that

children

shouldn't

use

their

phones

during a

school

day

due to

the fact that it causes them distraction

thus

they wouldn't be able to stay focused in

class

, on the other ,hand some

people

think that it's an effective way of learning. I believe that allowing the

use

of

smartphones

during

class

has a positive impact on

students

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grades because

students

would be able to learn more by learning from games

also

the

teacher

could do competitions and give some presents to the winners by doing that all of the

students

would be focused in

class

. Some

people

think that

schools

should prevent

children

from using their

smartphones

during

school

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day

. Using

smartphones

in

class

has a negative impact on the

students

due to

the fact that it causes them a distraction and that would

leads

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to them failing classes.

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example

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they banned the

use

of

phones

in

class

because they have noticed an increased number of

students

failing in classes

due to

them using their

phones

the whole

day

during classes.

On the other hand

, some

people

think that

children

should be allowed to

use

their

smartphones

in

school

. Using

phones

during

class

could be an effective way of learning, the

teacher

can grip the

children

's attention by conveying the information through a game on their

phones

.

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a friend of mine is a

teacher

who had a hard time teaching

children

until another

teacher

introduced her to a new teaching technique which is teaching them through a game, after that she applied it in her

class

and the

children

loved it very much and

due to

that all of them passed the

class

with high scores.

Overall

, Some

people

think that

schools

should bad

children

from using

smartphones

while

others believe that

schools

should allow

children

to bring their

phones

. I believe that

children

should

use

their

smartphones

during

class

because it has a positive effect on their grades. One great suggestion would be that

schools

could allow using

smartphones

only when the

teacher

asks them to do it in order to learn more effectively after that the

teacher

could collect their

phones

and give

it

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to them after the

school

day

ends.