In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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it is

oftenly

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often

argued that buying a

home

is more important than renting a

home

.

While

there are several justifiable reasons for

this

decision,

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can not be underestimated the benefits of buying a property over

the

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renting

one

. There are a lot of motivations

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having

an

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ownership of

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despite

of

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the huge costs.

Firstly

, rent prices are dramatically increasing in industrialised cities and metropolitan areas.

This

can make people

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think of buying a

home

as an investment instrument. Buying

house

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a house

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and renting it

later on

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can be a good income resource in especially big cities.

Secondly

, in most

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the

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traditional countries, people can invest not just for themselves, but

also

for their kids and the next generation of them.

Hence

, buying a

home

can be considered

as

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a permanent and everlasting asset which will be left to their children.

Finally

,

this

decision is sometimes forced by current conditions.

For example

, in

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overpopulated cities, there is a looming problem which is

lack

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of rental

house

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.

This

can

be resulted

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with

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the people’s

house

ownership if

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one

has enough money.

Home ownership

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can be beneficial in various aspects. But the main

one

is financial concerns.

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of paying

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rent price

in

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every month, buying a

home

come with a huge cost at

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first time. But in the following years,

this

will begin to impact positively on

monthly

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the monthly

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budget of householders.

Moreover

, if any changes occur in the price of renting

house

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in the market,

this

will not

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affect

to

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the owners. Regarding these possible advantages, buying a property can protect

to

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the owners from financial crises that might the

one

possibly face. In conclusion,

at the first stage

, buying a

home

can be a very challenging case for those who do not have

adequate

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financial

statement

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, but

it is clear that

advantages outdo drawbacks in especially financial sides over the years

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following

of

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it.