You have seen an advertisement for part-time job at a restaurant and want to apply for it. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: describe your experience-previous job experience in a hot pot resturant , waitress, and reception to welcome customers, ordered the ingredients from suppliers tell him why you are interested in the job-delectable food, culinary school, interact with customers say why you think you would be suitable for the job-has similar work experience, understand how to serve with client and has positive feedback from clients and former employer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter with regard to a

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posting for a temporary

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at a restaurant, and I desire to apply for it. My previous work experience was in a hot pot shop and my

job

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duty is to serve customers.

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, I had to recommend today's special menu to guests, and sometimes, I stood at the front desk to welcome consumers.

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, I assist the chief in phoning cooperated suppliers to order ingredients. The reason why I am enthusiastic about

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work is that I am fond of delectable food, and I have noticed your remarkable restaurant for a

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. Currently, I am in a culinary school.

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reason, I hope I can build more practical experience in a successful steakhouse and increase opportunities to interact with new clientele. Since I have a similar

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experience, I believe that I am able to be competent in being a waitress at your store. I

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have positive feedback from my former employer who commented that most customers were fully satisfied with my service.

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, I hope you can consider accepting my resume and arranging an interview with me. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Claire Chen

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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207 words

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