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Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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 the
workloads
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 in an assignment, each
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students
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 have special
personalities
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personality
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, let alone when it comes to
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 who have
mental
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a mental
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 health
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,
such
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 as ADHD and Bipolar disorder.
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 a few people have their own preference to
work
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 as a team
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 a school project and the other
students
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 prefer to
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 alone.  From my point of view, both options have each
drawbacks
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 and conditions. In
this
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 essay, I will examine what kind of projects will be best suited as teamwork or
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an individual
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one
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. First of all, normal individuals might not find any difficulties in choosing whether group teaming or
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 their own
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a
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homework.
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, freshmen who have special treatment do not need peers to
work
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 with. A good illustration of
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 is if someone with ADHD
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 his or her assignment, it would be challenging if he or she should have a group because of her or his inability to have a good relationship with others.
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, some others are better
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 their
work
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 with classmates.
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, individuals with Bipolar disorder could not manage to finish
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 study which needs a large amount of routine since they tend to get bored often.
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 in lower grades.   To summarize,
students
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' preference
in
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 working in a group or alone depends on both workloads and personalities, mainly if someone has
mental
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 disorder.
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, there is no silver bullet in choosing
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 both sides. With the rise of technology in
education
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 system,
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students
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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