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The two pie charts illustrate the most frequent passenger complaints of two international airlines as well as their passengers' overall satisfaction. The airlines are One World Air and Blue Sky Airways.

The two pie charts illustrate the most frequent passenger complaints of two international airlines as well as their passengers' overall satisfaction. The airlines are One World Air and Blue Sky Airways.
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The two pie charts illustrate the most frequent
passenger
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complaints
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 of two international airlines
as well as
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 their passengers' satisfaction. The airlines are
One
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World
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Air
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 and Blue
Sky
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Airways
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.
Overall
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, the
complaints
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 fall into seven categories: low-quality food, poor customer service, expensive tickets, lost or delayed luggage, delayed or cancelled flights, limited
space
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 on the aircraft, and others. The most common objection about both airlines
are
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 expensive tickets and a lack of
space
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 on board. More than a third of
One
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World
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Air
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 passengers have complained about ticket prices,
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 29% have complained about limited
space
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 onboard.
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, the most common complaint about Blue
Sky
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Airways
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 is the limited
space
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 on planes, which accounts for 36% of all
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complaints
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. Expensive ticket
complaints
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 account for 31% of
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 criticism and are the second most common source of
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 discontent. Third and fourth positions go to delayed or cancelled flights (28%), and poor customer service (22%), respectively, as the causes of consumer dissatisfaction with
One
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World
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Air
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. The third and fourth most common
complaints
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 against Blue
Sky
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Airways
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 are allegations of low-quality food for nearly a quarter and delayed or cancelled flights , respectively.
This
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 is mirrored in the
overall
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 satisfaction rating as well, with Blue
Sky
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Airways
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 receiving 87% compared to
One
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World
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Air
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's approximately three quarters. criticism concerning customer service on the previous airline amounted to merely 3%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 92%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words passenger, complaints, one, world, air, sky, airways, space with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrate" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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