The two pie charts illustrate the most frequent passenger complaints of two international airlines as well as their passengers' overall satisfaction. The airlines are One World Air and Blue Sky Airways.

The two pie charts illustrate the most frequent passenger complaints of two international airlines as well as their passengers' overall satisfaction. The airlines are One World Air and Blue Sky Airways.
The two pie charts illustrate the most frequent
passenger
complaints
of two international airlines
as well as
their passengers' satisfaction. The airlines are
One
World
Air
and Blue
Sky
Airways
.
Overall
, the
complaints
fall into seven categories: low-quality food, poor customer service, expensive tickets, lost or delayed luggage, delayed or cancelled flights, limited
space
on the aircraft, and others. The most common objection about both airlines
are
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expensive tickets and a lack of
space
on board. More than a third of
One
World
Air
passengers have complained about ticket prices,
while
29% have complained about limited
space
onboard.
In contrast
, the most common complaint about Blue
Sky
Airways
is the limited
space
on planes, which accounts for 36% of all
passenger
complaints
. Expensive ticket
complaints
account for 31% of
passenger
criticism and are the second most common source of
passenger
discontent. Third and fourth positions go to delayed or cancelled flights (28%), and poor customer service (22%), respectively, as the causes of consumer dissatisfaction with
One
World
Air
. The third and fourth most common
complaints
against Blue
Sky
Airways
are allegations of low-quality food for nearly a quarter and delayed or cancelled flights , respectively.
This
is mirrored in the
overall
satisfaction rating as well, with Blue
Sky
Airways
receiving 87% compared to
One
World
Air
's approximately three quarters. criticism concerning customer service on the previous airline amounted to merely 3%.
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