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Some people agree with spending lots money on a large wedding, while other think a small wedding is a better option. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #lots #money #option
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this
 contemporary epoch,
number
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if
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of
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individual
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individuals
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 concur with spending
high
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a high
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 range of
money
 on
a big
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a big marriage
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marriages
.Whiles other reject
this
 notion that some people believe in
spend
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 less bill
in
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on
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 a wedding ceremony is
great
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deal
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.
However
,I
satisfied
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 with
latter
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the latter
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 view.
This
 essay will discuss
the
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both mentioned phenomenon in the upcoming paragraph. There
are
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 adequate evidence which
are
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 substantial first and the foremost reason is that nowadays
expand
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 cash on ceremonial is going to be
trend
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a trend
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.
Therefore
,so many masses will spend
money
 on
marriages
for
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to
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get
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 fame and make the day memorable.Adding more to it different people have different choices of
weddings
such
 as some individual like to celebrate traditional ceremony and some are like to do
causual
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casual
 ceremony and they spend more and
nore
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more
 cash on it.
Additionally
 on the celebration of marriage individuals
most
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are most
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 likely to spend the bill on catering,decorations,music systems
as well as
 the rental of big resorts. Probing ahead who oppose
this
 notion that some
crowd's believe
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 in simple marriage like they like to do
weddings
 in
temple
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the temple
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 or some religious places like church and gurudwara.
Moreover
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whoes
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whose
who's
 people
do
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who do
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 not have
budget
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a budget
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 to celebrate
the
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apply
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large
marriages
they
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are happy to recognise small
weddings
.
Nevertheless
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 some individuals are not preferred to show off they usually honour the wedding at their house they invite their family members.
Initiallyp
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Initially
 perform  simple
weddings
 can
safe
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money
 and avoid
to waste
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 food
as well as
 they can invest
at
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in
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 some good business so in the future they can earn and settle themselves.
To conclude
,Well
according to
 my opinion big
marriages
 is a waste of
money
.
However
,simple ceremonies are better for
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the individual
an individual
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individual
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individuals
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.
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