Some people agree with spending lots money on a large wedding, while other think a small wedding is a better option. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In
this
contemporary epoch, a number of
individuals
concur with spending a high range of wealth on a big
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marriage merger
marriage-merger
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other
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reject
this
notion that some people believe
in
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spending less bill on a wedding ceremony is
a
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great
to
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deal.
However
,I am satisfied with the latter view.
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essay will discuss both mentioned
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in the upcoming paragraph. There is adequate evidence which is substantial first and
the
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foremost reason
is
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that nowadays expanding cash on ceremonial is going to be a trend.
Therefore
,so many masses will spend property on
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the merger
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merger
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to
getting
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fame and make the day memorable.Adding more to it different people have different choices of
marriage
such
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as
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some
individual
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individuals
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like to celebrate traditional
ceremony
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and some
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like to do casual
ceremony
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and they spend more and more cash on it.
Additionally
on the celebration of
marriage
individuals
are most likely to spend the bill on catering,decorations,music systems
as well as
the rental of big resorts. Probing ahead who oppose
this
notion that some
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believed in simple
marriage
like they like to do
marriage
in the temple or some religious places like church and gurudwara.,
Moreover
who's people who do not have a budget to celebrate large wedding are happy to recognise
small
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the small
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marriage
.,
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some
individuals
are not preferred to show off they usually honour the wedding at their house they invite their family members.
Initially
perform simple
marriage
can save payment and avoid wasting food
as well as
they can invest in some good business so in the future they can earn and settle themselves.
To conclude
,Well
according to
my opinion
big
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merger is a waste of payment.
However
,simple ceremonies are better for
individuals
.
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