The extinction of specific plants and animals has been one of the environmental problems in the modern era.
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others think we should focus on much more serious issues like global warming. I will admit that it is important to take into account all potential threats to the environment.
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with, we should spend time considering the most harmful effects on our surroundings, especially plant and animal. As long as people are dumping trash into the ocean, and using plastic products, more and more creatures will lose their habitats. Linking Words
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, in the end, they will die out, which would cause a loss of biodiversity. Linking Words
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, damaging our healthy environment.
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, global warming is a popular and famous topic nowadays, which is caused mainly by ozone layer depletion. Ever since the industrial revolution began, factories, power plants and especially cars have burned fossil fuels releasing a huge amount of CO2 into the atmosphere. These greenhouse gasses are trapping more heat from the sun. Linking Words
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a paper that was published in New York in 2010, if we didn't reduce our dependence on cars, it would result in increasingly serious negative effects.
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