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You have just spend a weekend staying at The Taj hotel in Mumbai. When you get home you find out that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager. Explain in the letter: *When did you visit the hotel. *the details of your room and the bag * how can one identify the bag

#weekend #taj #hotel #mumbai #home #bag #manager #*when #visit #*the #room
Dear Sir/
madam
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, I would like to inform you that on
thé
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the
 dated 23rd -28th of March 2022 was staying at your Hotel with
the
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rooms
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 number 1205 and when I checked out from the hotel I was in
hurry
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 because my flight
on
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date
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 line. As you know
while
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when
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 I
am arrived
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 in Sydney, I just realise that I left my
handbag
 in the room
in side
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inside
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 desk close to the windows. Would you please check for me?  Herewith
the
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 details of my
handbag
 with the Red colour and from the leather win two zippers on the side and
also
 has a small handle
with
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in
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 brown colour and the size around 20cm
heigh
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high
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 and 20cm
of
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wide. Well, inside
of
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my
handbag
 are
the
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 wallet with red colour inside the
wallets
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 are
fives
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 of credit card and my Id cards and some keys cards as well, and some money I
thinks
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 around $600 and some coins
off
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of
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 course, and my lipstick. Please kindly assist me to inform me know with my phone number and the address below if you found
out
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my
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about my
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handbag
, and I do not mind if you charge me for the fee to send my
handbag
 through the postage. Sincerely yours, Janny
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