The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
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The line chart illustrates the number of visitors to the specific islands in the Caribbean from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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, by 2010, the total of tourists staying on ships and the island increased gradually up to 1,5 in 2012.
Moreover
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, there was a massive rose in 3 years but
then
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remained steady between 2014 and 2016, yet it reached its peak at 3,5 million in 2017. As it is presented in the graph, the number of foreigners that stayed in luxury liners fluctuated at the beginning of the year,
while
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it started to go up from 2012 to 2014. In 2015, there was a massive resurgence of people choosing to rest on cruise ships, which were two million visitors.
According to
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the details, the sum of newcomers in the Caribbean had slightly increased throughout the period, and it had levelled out by 2013 to 2015 in one and a half million people.
However
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, it upsurged again in 2017 and reached a similar number of tourists in 2013.
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