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Task 01: Pie Chart The charts below show the differences in how people in 3 countries learned English in 2010 and 2015. Task 01: Pie Chart The charts below show the differences in how people in 3 countries learned English in 2010 and 2015.

Task 01: Pie Chart The charts below show the differences in how people in 3 countries learned English in 2010 and 2015. Task 01: Pie Chart The charts below show the differences in how people in 3 countries learned English in 2010 and 2015.
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The pie chart illustrates the English learning habits of people residing in 3 different countries in the years 2010 and 2015
Overall
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, in the previous
year
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 abroad
studies
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 are not much preferred and online
studies
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 are least focused.
Similarly
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, in the current
year
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 abroad
studies
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 are approached less but somewhat the same importance is given to evening
classes
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.
To begin
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 with
Country
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 A, in the
year
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 2010 70% of people attended evening
classes
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, which decreased by 3% in the
year
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 2015. When we focus on Abroad
studies
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, in 2010 25% of the public opted for overseas education
this
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 slightly declined by 2% in the
year
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 2015. The
last
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 selected option for English education was online
classes
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 which were 5% in the
year
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 2010 and increased by 5% in the
year
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 2015.
In addition
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,
country
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 B has outraced by 2% in comparison to
Country
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 A in terms of evening
classes
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 for the
year
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 2010, which down raced by 24% in the
year
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 2015.
While
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 discussing online
studies
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, it was 8% in the
year
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 2010 and drastically increased by 24% in the
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 2015. The percentage of English education abroad remains constant for both years
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 20%. Eventually in the case of
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 C, in the
year
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 ,2010 only 6% of citizens had an online lecture, which increased by 9% in the
year
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 2015. The most focused area in the
year
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 2010 was evening
classes
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 which significantly declined by 12% in the
year
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 2015. Not a single person evening taught about going abroad in the
year
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 2010, but in the
year
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 ,2015 3% of people opted for the same.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, studies, classes, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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