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Some people think that we can use as much fresh water as we want. Others think that fresh water supply should be controlled strictly by governments as the sources are limited. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is argued that
water
 should be used by
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individuals to their fullest as it is the fundamental need of people whilst
other
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beleive
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believe
 that
water
usage
 should be governed by authority
beacuse
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because
 of the scarcity of
water
 and unavailability of substitute products. I support the latter belief because
water
 is a limited supply and
thus
 it should be used as wisely as possible. Fresh
water
 is an essential component
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 our lives. From drinking to bathing to washing
everyday
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 in our day-to-day activities we use
water
. Without
it
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 we can not do any household chores. Most importantly
water
 is called
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life as we can not live without it. It is the core element of our lives.
Thus
, the supply of fresh
water
 should be abundant. Any type of restriction should not be imposed on the
usage
 of
water
. From the other
perspective
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 it is said that
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water
usage
 should be controlled by the government concisely.
Otherwise
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 we will face a world full of dismay and scarcity. We will run out of fresh
water
 soon.
Moreover
, not any other element can be used as a substitute
of
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water
. So, we should think of that situation beforehand and try to prevent it.
Therefore
, I think imposing restrictions on
fresh
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water
usage
 would be a
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 action.
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this
, people would be concerned
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 the possible dangers and they will be more aware of not wasting any
water
. So in conclusion it can be said that, though there is a debate revolving around
water
usage
 and government restrictions on using
water
, it is wiser to control the supply of
water
 as planned. Because fresh
water
 is not an unlimited resource and unplanned use of it may result in a dangerous
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