The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given maps outline the plan

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constructing

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town

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the town

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in a new way. The

town

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is totally seen that it will be arranged from industrial to futuristic. The significant change between

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and after is there will have a big road which is directly connected to the

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center

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Norbition

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Nutrition

. One another big development we can see

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in the future, all

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factories

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the

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center

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of the

town

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will be reversed

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residences. In the future as

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shown

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school

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playground

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,shops and medical

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center

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will be created for the infrastructure of the area.

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result

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we can expect that the

town

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will put some

efforts

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to make

community

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a community

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for habitats and

welfare

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for

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children

also

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Last

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points

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of changing

area

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following the map is making roads to approach

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the

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center

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from everywhere.

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center

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exist which will be combined with

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central spot of the

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, center with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

155 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned future development
factories
warehouses
railway line
shopping center
residential buildings
college
mixed-use zone
commercial
residential
educational
green spaces
pedestrian walkways
housing
community
retail services
revitalize
quality of life
vibrant
sustainable

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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a mall community?

in many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. do you think this is a positive or negative development

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to Job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of Job satisfaction for all workers?

The proportion of older people is increasing, what problems will this cause and what solutions can be suggested?