The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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for
town
in a new way.
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the town
town
is totally seen that it will be arranged from industrial to futuristic.
The significant change between previous
and after is there will have a big road which is directly connected to the Correct article usage
the previous
center
of Change the spelling
centre
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.
One another big development we can see Correct your spelling
Nutrition
is
in the future, all Correct your spelling
it
facatories
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factories
surrounded
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surrounding
center
of the Change the spelling
centre
town
will be reversed to
residences.
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showned
on a map, like Correct your spelling
shown
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a school
school
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schools
playground
,shops and medical Fix the agreement mistake
playgrounds
center
will be created for the infrastructure of the area. Fix the agreement mistake
centers
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result
we can expect that the Add a comma
,result
town
will put some efforts
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effort
community
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a community
the community
welfare
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the welfare
for
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of
also
.
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The last
points
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point
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the area
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apply
center
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centre
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, there will extra center
exist which will be combined with Change the spelling
centre
main
central spot of the Correct article usage
the main
town
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