Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is loss species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the advancement of science and technology, people focus on profits and experiments though that innovation

harmful

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to

environment

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the environment

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. Nowadays, we have to face so many environmental problems

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of that.

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of sensitive species of flora and fauna is a part of that but there are more effects than

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the loss

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of animals and plants. In

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essay, I will suppose that there are

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number of troubles occur

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of environmental imbalance. On the one hand, people only care about protecting animals and vegetation which

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from

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climate change.

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, there are so many international programmes going on to protect polar bears and china bears. Not only that but

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some replantation projects

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held by

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.

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, it helps to keep

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environmental balance,

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it

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projects dio-diversity.

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, food chains will be affected badly, if we don’t pay

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attention to prevent the loss of living creatures.

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, I thoroughly believe that there are more issues and we must concern about them

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. For

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example

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climate change is the main issue and increasing natural

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as

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effect of it. So, if we reduce the causes which build up

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this

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terrible changes in

environment

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the environment

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the other species

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.

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, scientists, governments and

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have equal

oppourtunity

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pariticate

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participate

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dropping down

carbon

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footprint, water pollution, etc.

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, I can conclude that, in

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contemporary society, most

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animals and flora

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in danger and we should react to prevent

damages

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for

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them. Eventually, we

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loss

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our habitat,

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we get

step

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to minimize

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problem.