Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is loss species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
With the advancement of science and technology, people focus on profits and experiments though that innovation
harmful
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is harmful
environment
. Nowadays, we have to face so many environmental problems Add an article
the environment
as a result
of that. Disappearing
of sensitive species of flora and fauna is a part of that but there are more effects than Correct article usage
The disappearing
loss
of animals and plants. In Add an article
the loss
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this
essay, I will suppose that there are significant
number of troubles occur Change the article
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the significant
as a result
of environmental imbalance.
On the one hand, people only care about protecting animals and vegetation which was threaten
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was threatened
from
climate change. Change preposition
by
For instance
, there are so many international programmes going on to protect polar bears and china bears. Not only that but also
so
some replantation projects Correct word choice
apply
is
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also
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NGOs
Consequently
, it helps to keep continuously
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continuous
as well as
it
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Moreover
, food chains will be affected badly, if we don’t pay our
attention to prevent the loss of living creatures.
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On the other hand
, I thoroughly believe that there are more issues and we must concern about them also
. For an
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example
climate change is the main issue and increasing natural Add a comma
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disasters
a
effect of it. So, if we reduce the causes which build up Change the article
an
this
terrible changes in Correct determiner usage
these
environment
, it will help Add an article
the environment
to
the other species Change preposition
apply
also
. Furthermore
, scientists, governments and public
have equal Correct article usage
the public
oppourtunity
to Correct your spelling
opportunity
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participate
for
dropping down Change preposition
in
carbon
footprint, water pollution, etc.
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the carbon
To sum up
, I can conclude that, in this
contemporary society, most of
animals and flora Change preposition
apply
is
in danger and we should react to prevent Correct subject-verb agreement
are
damages
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damage
for
them. Eventually, we Change preposition
to
also
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our habitat, Replace the word
lose
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