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International travel has many advantages to both travellers and the country that they visited. Do advantages outhweigh the disadvantages?

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Squabbling on International travel is interminable in today's aeon. Controversy exists as to whether it's
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 and adverse before making a final conclusion. There are prolific points to agree with the meritorious side. First of all, tourism is
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one of the best revenue
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 which will strengthen the nation's economy.
Due to
 low-flight
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, many people are willing to travel from one country to
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 than
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 past years.
Therefore
, it's boosting third-party
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 economy is using for
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better infrastructure.
For instance
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 upon tourism income.Another factor to consider is that visitors can explore
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new places and can understand other nation's
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 and
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.
In addition
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businessman
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 to expand their companies in other nations and make new friends. Needless to say, all these points stand in good stead.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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