You are a woman working for large corporation you have experienced a lot of sexism as far as the job promotion goes. write a letter to your CEO for the same. In your letter describe what happened to you give details on how you are being treated say what you want CEO to do for you

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Dear Mike, I am writing

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letter to express my disappointment with our management team. I have been employed with the company for the

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5 years but still working as a certified associate in the Customer service department. I am working under the supervision of Mr Gopal who is on a manager position currently. I came to know about the promotion of my colleague working in the same department as me

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year.

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I am very happy with his success as we are good friends since he joined.

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pitched me to write a letter to you that I have better skills and experience as well with both customer and group goals than him. Meanwhile, I felt a number of times that our association had a different environment of sexism

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as I only got promoted once but male workers who have fewer qualifications or started with me now working in higher positions under

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company. I want justice for every working woman in

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association, want you to give instructions to the management team of our department so that they can work on

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immediately and effectively as well. I am looking forward to hearing back from you soon. yours faithfully, jaskaran

Submitted by kaurjaskaran007 on Tue Feb 07 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

206 words

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