You have some time off work and are hoping to visit a close friend, Stephanie, for a few days. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •suggest spending time together • explain why you have time to do this • propose some activities Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Stephanie,

Dear Stephanie, I hope you and your family are doing well. I am very sorry for replying too late to your letter ,

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I have good news that I got two weeks' holiday from work which I like to visit your home. It would be great if we could have a coffee from our favourite cafe in your city where we usually spent time together when we were free in past and talked about our ambitions. I am really excited to see you on these vacations because it is almost one year since we did not see each other

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our hectic schedules.

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, it is Christmas time

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we both have holidays from work .

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we can enjoy

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festival together. I would appreciate it if you will go with me skating near CN Tower on New Year's eve. We will do skating and watch the fireworks of

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Year celebration in the CN tower which is famous in Canada.

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, we will go for dinner at your favourite Indian restaurant. Hope to hear from you soon Best wishes, Nick

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Feb 7, 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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183 words

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