Example Letter: Your next-door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: – Your reason for writing – What you would like to happen – A nice, respectful style

Dear Mr Smith, I hope you are doing well! I am writing
this
letter regarding your
dog
barking the entire day ,particularly at night.
Also
, I am living next to your door and it's extremely hard for floor residents to take proper power naps
as well as
proper sleep. Unfortunately, especially my family
also
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through
this
difficulty for an entire day. Turning to the possible solutions, I am suggesting you please see your
dog
to an animal doctor it might be more helpful for you because the
dog
may have some health issues or serious pain.
Secondly
, you could
also
buy some exercise machines or body movement toys which can help the
dog
to become more active.
Finally
, you can
also
contact apartment security and take advice from them because there are some pets in our apartment. I hope you will like my above-aforementioned solutions and let me know how it goes! If you give me some sort of feedback or an in-person meetup, I will suggest more solutions,
meanwhile
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the mandatory thing is to take proper consultation from a doctor. Kind Regards, Khawar Islam
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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