The chart below gives attendance figures for Grandville Stadium from 2017, which are projected through 2030 after a major improvement project.
The column graphs represent information about three
events
attended by a number of people from 2017 to 2020 with the forecast of presence numbers by 2030 after Grandville Stadium refinements in 2019.
On the whole, sport ranked 1 for the most visited event among the three events
, namely musical concerts
and theatrical performances. Conversely
, the data saw a significant increase in attendance
numbers within concerts
and theatres.
At the first glance, sporting events
had much more attendance
compared to the other two events
with 148000 visitors at least in 2017. In the same year, the number of attendance
for theatre
was about 10000, while
,at the same time, the figure for concerts
was about approximately 30000. In 2020, the number of attendance
for three events
is gradually rising than in 2017. Regarding the attendance
numbers in 2020, it consists of around 15000 for theatre
, a little more than the figure for theatre
for sporting events
, and almost 40000 for concerts
.
It is interesting to note that around 45000 people will have attended theatre
by 2030, whereas
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