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Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities while others believe a bicycle is a better way to commute. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities while others believe a bicycle is a better way to commute. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Automobile
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 has become ubiquitous for
traveling
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travelling
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 in recent decades. Many people believe that it is the most efficient way to
travel
 in towns,
on the other hand
, some argue that
bicycle
 is
far
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 more preferable way to commute. From my perspective,
bicycle
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the bicycle
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 is a better way to
travel
 because it produces less pollution and has more convenience. It is undeniable that
car
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 is a convenient option to transport quickly in many cities. Some areas are not connected to public transportation
such
 as trains or buses,
nevertheless
,
private
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the private
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vehicle
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vehicles
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 can access
to
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these particular places easily.
However
, if everyone uses their own vehicles,
traffic
 congestion will happen as if disaster. In Thailand,
for example
, poor mass transit causes
civilian
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civilians
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 to drive cars resulting in 44 hours wasted on the roads
in
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each year.
Therefore
, personal vehicles are
the
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a
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 good choices to access some locations where public transport is not accessible, unfortunately, it usually comes with
traffic
 issues. Air pollution is mainly created by
automobiles’
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automobiles
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 emissions
such
 as carbon dioxide.
Bicycle
 is one of the greatest
innovation
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innovations
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 that can certainly reduce
this
 issue. It is not only environmentally friendly
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 but
also
 more convenient than
car
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a car
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. To illustrate, citizens can cycle within
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the neighborhood
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neighborhood
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neighborhoods
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 freely and take it
on
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mass transit conveniently in Denmark. The primary reason is that the government encourage people to use more cycles
by
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through
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 several measures
such
 as
car-free
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a car-free
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 day.
Additionally
,
this
 type of transportation doesn’t have to deal with heavy
traffic
 in towns
due to
 its mobility and flexibility.
Bicycle
,
therefore
, helps civilian to
travel
 easily. To recapitulate,
this
 essay discussed that
automobile
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 is not always an appropriate choice to
travel
 since cycling can decrease
the
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air pollution and avoid
the
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traffic
congestions
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congestion
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 simultaneously. In my opinion, it is important to protect the environment as much as
possile
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possible
, and cycling is one of the best solutions to overcome
the
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environmental problems.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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