The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district

The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district
The table shows the amount of revenue collected by a tiny diner in the downtown area from Monday to Sunday, which is categorized by Lunch and Dinner. In general, the Lunch category presents a gradual climb, where it reached its peak on Wednesday.
On the other hand
, Dinner shows a
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fluctuating
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trend with the highest revenue on Tuesday and the opposite one on Sunday. Lunch started its trend with $2,400 revenue on Monday,
then
increased gradually until Wednesday.
Although
it produced a slight decrease on Thursday, it managed to gain a spike on Friday.
Conversely
, it fell to a low of $1,950 on Saturday and continued to drop. Dinner began
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$3,623 on Monday and had a moderate increase on Tuesday. It slid to $3,445 on Wednesday but successfully grew
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the next day.
However
, it plunged to a low of $2,900
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Saturday and ended up
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until Sunday.
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