In the past, lectures were used as a way of teaching large number of students ,but now with the development of the technology for education many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. Agree or disagree

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In today's perpetually transforming epoch. Education is an essential thing for people's bright future.
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, in the past,
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lecture in Big crow, but now
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technological improvements in education. Few mankind proclaims that there is not any justification for joining classes. Are you shall give some disagreement view in forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with the disagreement side of
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trend, the first and foremost is Pupils cannot able to interact with their
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, at the starting age of
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when they join their primary school, they do not have the ability to discriminate between right and wrong things. So, you scholars must have a good guide at starting primary school. If
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not
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lectures, they are not able to interact with
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. So, it has many detrimental effects on the scholar.
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, not have proper discipline and guidance for
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studying
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, through a computer, Pupil cannot attach emotionally.
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, computers give every type of knowledge
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they want but it does not provide emotional attachment.
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, the teacher can able to make their lecture interesting through their skills
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as giving social knowledge and
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to listen
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do not feel
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.
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,
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the Indian government, during Corona pandemic, the rate of join in virtual had
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decreased
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low interaction between
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and
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, but after Corona ,
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pandemic
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it had increase your 25% population of
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attending classes in rooms.
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, giving knowledge a room is better than virtually. In conclusion, I fully disagree with the statement that attending classes has its own positive effects on
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