In the past, lectures were used as a way of teaching large number of students ,but now with the development of the technology for education many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. Agree or disagree

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In today's perpetually transforming epoch. Education is an essential thing for people's bright future.

However

, in the past,

teachers

prefer to

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lecture in Big crow, but now

due to

technological improvements in education. Few mankind proclaims that there is not any justification for joining classes. Are you shall give some disagreement view in forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with the disagreement side of

this

trend, the first and foremost is Pupils cannot able to interact with their

teachers

In other words

, at the starting age of

students

when they join their primary school, they do not have the ability to discriminate between right and wrong things. So, you scholars must have a good guide at starting primary school. If

students

does

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not

attends

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lectures, they are not able to interact with

teachers

. So, it has many detrimental effects on the scholar.

For example

, not have proper discipline and guidance for

stuyding

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studying

Secondly

, through a computer, Pupil cannot attach emotionally.

In addition

, computers give every type of knowledge

which

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they want but it does not provide emotional attachment.

However

, the teacher can able to make their lecture interesting through their skills

such

as giving social knowledge and

tolisten

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to listen

some funny talk by that

student

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students

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do not feel

boring

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For instance

according to

the Indian government, during Corona pandemic, the rate of join in virtual had

been

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decreased

due to

low interaction between

teachers

and

students

, but after Corona ,

pendemic

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pandemic

endemic

it had increase your 25% population of

students

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attending classes in rooms.

Therefore

, giving knowledge a room is better than virtually. In conclusion, I fully disagree with the statement that attending classes has its own positive effects on

students

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In the past, lectures were used as a way of teaching large number of students ,but now with the development of the technology for education many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. Agree or disagree

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