The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of making instant noodles.
Overall
, the production is mainly done by factory equipment. To begin
with, a big amount of flour from a truck will be stored in the storage by a connecting pipe between the truck and the warehouse. Nextly, the specific amount of flour which has been added to water and oil will be processed in the mixing machine to homogenise the mixture. Thus
, this
process produced a fine texture dough.
After that, the dough will be automatically rolled by rollers which then
it
goes through cutting by a sharp knife attached to the machine, resulting in several round pieces of material. Each cut will be shaped as noodles in the discs and go through a deep frying process.
In the end, the dry noodles are filled with Correct pronoun usage
apply
vegetable
and spices in cups where the labels and seal protection is being stuck around the packaging.Fix the agreement mistake
vegetables
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